Deonna Ingrum
Friday, July 15, 2011
Could you give "Her" a name and c/c please?
How about Gyra (hard G sound and ruh). This is the name given to the earth mother. All I could was the last two lines. In the first 3 verses you have 4 lines then you sort of unbalance them. It's a wonderful poem. Good job.
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